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Time, you heartless bastard
You mercilessly tick on and on
And for what reason?
Why do you not ever pause?
Never give me time to think?

I stutter and mumble to keep up
And all because you will never slow down
Help me out here
I look like a fool to my peers
With all these "umms"

And now it is becoming to late
My friends feel the need to take their lives
All because you move to fast
I cant bear to see them gone
Time, you heartless bastard
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I've gotten really into writing free verse lately. I don't know why though. Just inspiration to do it I guess. This is dedicated to quite a few friends of mine. Sometimes it feels like I'm the only one that has never participated in self harm related activities. It's those friends that made the 3rd verse and my own teenage awkwardness that made the 2nd.
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*TristanCody Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Very personal, in a sense and I like that because it was the personal aspect which you had which formed the piece. In all honesty, I felt a tad bit of awkwardness at the last line, but all-in-all you have made a grand impact by this piece. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts with us all.

Tristan Cody.
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:iconskullchicka:
Thank you for that comment! I'll take the awkwardness in account for future works.
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*TristanCody Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
All my pleasure! I love to hear that, not often do I receive a comment saying people will note the advice others give.
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:iconskullchicka:
It amazes me that people don't. I mean, don't they want to get better at what they're doing?
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*TristanCody Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Not many do because they have no craving for improvement. Sad, I know - but a fatal reality.
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:iconskullchicka:
I guess some people just don't have ambition where you would think they would.
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*TristanCody Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
I agree. Anyways, I am glad you do.

Thank you for the conversation,
Tristan Cody.
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